Tuesday, July 7, 2009

What love means deleted scene #3

Gaara’s POV


You were working late, dreading each passing minute you were spending away from Aisune. It has been about three or four mouths since your confessions and you two have become comfortable being each other’s lover. The awkward days have long passed, and now there were basically no hesitations. You loved her, and she loved you. It was just perfect. Takai occasionally popped in and out, but never to cause harm, just maybe to say hi, or break something… But, other then that, she was kept under your control, you let Tsundae know of everything that happened and she approves. It was maybe about mid night and you were just finished your last papers when your office phone rang.

You answered: “Hello, Kazekage office?” you recognized the voice to be Aisune.

Aisune whimpered: “Gaara…” you knew that tone. It was the tone of need. And a tone that could get you aroused in any mood you were currently in.

You: “I’ll be right there” she hung up the phone and you did too. You dropped your pen, stood up, and quickly exited. Your own need raising as you thought about her. Aisune rarely got like this, but when she did, you rushed to her immediately. You got home and quickly rushed up the stairs, knowing that everyone else in the house was asleep you went straight to your room seeing Aisune on your bed looking dangerously sexy. Her hair was messy from constant turning, cheeks pink, breathing softly, wearing a small silk green dress. She looked at you; eyes coated slightly with lust and let a soft mewl come from her mouth. Your excitement boiled and you closed the door and walked over to her sitting on the bed to take off your shoes. She sat up behind you and wrapped her arms around you’re you resting her hands on your chest, nuzzling her face into your back, grinding her waist into yours and moaned quietly. You shivered slightly and your pants tightened a little, already smelling her delicious aroused sent.

Aisune inhaled: “Gaara…” one of your hands went to her thigh and rubbed sensually against her smooth skin about as silky as her lingerie. You thought for a minute. Was foreplay really suitable right now? When Aisune was in the stage, she could get a little aggressive, it was either because you got her addicted to sex, or it could be because she had a sexual deviant of a neko demon inside her. Either way, you could just take her now, or you could make her wait a little. You yourself always enjoyed a little foreplay, seeing as though Takai’s influence on Aisune has made her quite good at it, plus you just flat out loved to touch her. You turned around slightly, grabbing her head by the sides and bringing her lips to yours. You tongue ran across hers, waiting for her to open her mouth, getting impatient when she didn’t. She moved her hands to you shoulder and you kissed her harder. She still didn’t open her mouth. You smirked a little into the kiss. So she did want foreplay. Very well, you would give your love what she wanted. You pinned Aisune to the bed.

You: “Is she under control?” Aisune nodded and pulled at your clothes. Sometimes if she wasn’t careful, Takai sometimes slipped out during intimacy. Never during actual penetration, usually just during foreplay to mess with you. You could always sense the change in Aisune and Takai though. Takai was usually louder then Aisune, her voice was slightly darker pitched, plus she was more aggressive and rough. Not to mention the dark chakra you felt when she possessed her. You kissed her with dominance as your hand went to her side, rubbing the silk loving the feel. She moaned into your mouth, her tongue wrapping around your own. Her taste was wonderful, though not as good as the juices from her body. You bit her lip to mark her and then drew away from the kiss. Your eyes traveled down her perfect body and leaned forward, lightly nibbling her ear.

You cooed: “I’m not going easy this time, hmm?” She only moaned in response, her fingers already pulling up your shirt. “Patience…” The you whispered, though you were getting pretty sick of it yourself. Aisune gave a cute little pout and you half smiled half smirked down at her. Your fingers flicked her perk nipple threw her clothing and she arched her back. You grinned and began sucking on her neck, your fingers still rolling her hard bud. You stopped long enough for her to tear off your shirt. Her hands roamed over your chest and down your stomach, until they reached your pants. They frantically unbuttoned them and pulled the zipper down. You laughed softly. Maybe she didn’t want foreplay? Oh well.

You: “Not yet…” you took both her hands and pinned them over her head with one of yours as your tongue raked her seen cleavage. You took one of the straps of her lingerie in-between your teeth and the other on your hand and pulled down till her full breast were open to you. With her chest exposed, your hands kneaded the soft flesh of her breasts, gently flicking the tip with yours long fingers.

Aisune: “Ah…Gaara…” She breathed, gripping the silky crimson sheets. Soon your hand was replaced by your hot mouth, skilled tongue sucking tenderly on her pink bud, fingers rolling the neglected breast. You swirled your muscle around her tip, making her let out a quiet moan. You switched breasts, carefully biting her tender flesh. A sweet sound escaped her perfect lips as she took a breath. Then you parted, your hands running down her smooth sides slowly but surely. They ran by her perfect hips and down her outer thighs, where they paused.

Aisune: “Gaara.” Her voice was sexy and hoarse.

You: “Yes, Aisune?”

Aisune: “Please…” It didn’t take a genius to realize what she meant. Eager to please your lover, you slid your hands up her inner thigh where they softly stroked her burning desire. You were amused to find she wasn’t wearing any underwear. You smirked a little down at her. She jumped slightly as your index finger grazed the sensitive flesh over and over again. Then you slowly slid your finger into her, feeling her walls tighten around it. Aisune squirmed in pleasure, fisting the sheets even harder as you slowly pumped her. Your finger curled inside of her, touching her inside walls, before adding a second digit which joined the first in scissoring her.

Aisune: “Oh…” She moaned, her head thrashing from side to side in utter pleasure. You loved the sounds she’d make. You added a third digit, pulling out only once in a while to roll her tiny bundle of nerves in your smooth fingers. All too soon for her, your fingers were gone and she whimpered at the loss of your touch.

You chuckled slightly: “Don’t worry, I’m not finished with you yet.” Upon saying the words softly, you slid down her body until you was face to face with the female sex organ you knew well enough to make her writhe in pleasure. You blew gently and nearly laughed when she shivered as if she were cold. Though you knew she couldn’t be cold, it was the end of summer sure, but that didn’t make it cold. In painfully slow motion, your slick tongue slid deep inside of her, tasting that indescribable fluid of hers. She nearly screamed.

Aisune: “Ugh, yes…” She whispered, her hands releasing the suffocated sheets.
You swirled your skilled muscle inside of her, lapping up her addicting juices. You had to hold hips down from her constant bucking, not wanting to lose any teeth. Her hands wrapped around your head, fingers playing in your wild fire-colored hair. Your tongue flicked her clit once, then twice, before slipping back inside her hole and running over her inner walls. She pulled your head forward, forcing you to push deeper into her.

Aisune: “Oh G-Gaara…” She groaned, pulling even harder. God you never wanted it to end. The exotic taste of her, open up to you and you only. You continued to tongue-sex her even as her grip on his head tightened. Your face was so pressed up against her; it was kind of hard to breathe right. She continued to moan and writhe. “Mmm…yes…” Aisune wiggled as much as she could with her hips being held down, spreading her legs farther apart. As short as she was, you gotta say, her legs quite long. She was close to her climax, you were sure. And just as you thought she’d explode any moment, she did. She came into your mouth, letting out a loud moan. Damn she tasted delicious. You would eat her all day if you could. After your last swallow you sat up, and crawled up her sexy body to drown her in sweet kisses. Finally making it to her lips you allowed her to taste herself, and got no complaints. She wrapped her hands around your back, smoothing her palms down your skin and to your hips where she tugged at your pants. Aisune tried to growl, and she almost succeeded to, but she moaned in the process. That time you couldn’t hold back a slight laugh. You chuckled and began nibbling on her ear again.

You: “Was it my pants you wanted off?” you nuzzled your nose in her strawberry scented hair. Aisune nodded, her hands gliding across your bare chest and slowed when the reached your stomach obviously fascinated by your abs. They went lower still to reach your firm erection. You shuddered and unconsciously bucked into her small hand. She began tugging at your pants again, and you nodded. You sat up, tearing your lips away from her ear, and unbuttoned your pants and undid the belt. You got off the bed and slid down your pants off, leaving nothing but your boxers. You’d leave those for Aisune. She usually enjoyed doing that for you. You got on the bed allowed her to get on top of you this time. But before she could start her ministrations you kissed her passionately, letting your tongues swirl for a minute then let her continue. She went straight to your neck, biting and licking, letting her fangs go to use for a moment to bite into your flesh. You grunted as she drew blood and lapped it up. You froze for a minute, waiting for her to be done; hoping that small doze of blood didn’t excite Takai too much. Aisune raised up, and you looked at her, knowing that Takai was still tucked and away and relaxed some then felt her slide down your body. You let out a low hiss as you felt her kiss downward to your waist and kissed and sucked the side of your stomach. You could feel your lower twitch as she brushed past it. While her mouth was still attacking your abdomen, she hooked a finger inside of your boxers and began tugging them down. You took in a breath when your standing man hood was unshielded in the open air. You watched as she took you into her warm hand and pumped a few satisfying times and then took a lick. You gasped silently as she continuously licked a single side, lick after lick, after lick. You clutched the sheets and gritted your teeth in order to keep from losing you mind, along with your control. You could feel your length throbbing. You were about to lose it if she didn’t stop with the teasing.

You choked: “Aisune…” your voice was hoarse with lust “Stop…” her eyes flickered to yours and then engulfed half of your member in your mouth. You growled slightly and shut your eyes tightly satisfied with her choice. Her mouth licked your tip before descending down ward again, as far as she could without choking.

You moaned: “God Aisune…” you growled, losing all possible sanity. You could feel yourself throbbing in her mouth. Like the monster you were trying not be, you accidently grabbed Aisune’s hair and forced her further down onto you, thrusting your hips up to meet her open mouth. You were near the edge. So damn close, you could hardly control yourself. When you felt Aisune gag a little you quickly let go of her head feeling guilty.

You: “Sorry…” she just nodded and stopped, much to your displeasure, then sat up and threw off her tiny silk dress and was about to go back to your twitching shaft, but you grabbed her face and kissed her roughly, wanted to enter her now. You flipped your positions and grabbed a condom and quickly put it on before straddling her hips and plunged in her hot wet flower. Aisune whimpered and slightly dug her nails into your back. You gave a grunt of pleasure before kissing her lovingly. You ravaged her mouth and frantically played with her white silver hair wile pulling out and in, slowly and gently. You pulled your lips away from hers to breathe, never once removing your eyes from her desired expression. God you loved this girl. So much. You simply breathed heavily. But despite your lack of sound, the feeling was intense. You loved being inside Aisune.

Aisune: “Gaara…” She moaned as her arms involuntarily wrapped around your strong, naked back again and her eyes locked with yours. “More.” She said in between gasps. “F-faster.” Only happy to oblige, you quickened your pace. She squirmed. “D-deeper, p-please. Harder.” She failed to make complete sentences flow from her kiss-bruised lips. You thrusted harder, gritting your teeth and holding a death grip onto her hair. Aisune’s nails dug deeper into your back, almost drawing blood. “Oh, Gaara!” She cried out. You was now pounding into her as fast and hard as you could, your eyes tightly closed. Finally unable to hold it, you let out a low, sexy moan that made Aisune shiver in delight. Your breath was hard and irregular, while you pounded into her with such a speed her entire body rocked along with yours. You could feel yourself near.

Aisune panted: “I’m going to…ah!” She cried out as her second orgasm took hold. Her entire body spasmed with uncontrollable pleasure as she released herself.

You huffed: “Aisune…!” then you growled, tightening your death grip. The feel of her pouring onto you was so fantastic, you nearly exploded yourself. Aisune recovered from her high, you still pounding into her. You were so close. With a few final thrust, you exploded inside her-well, the condom, and couldn’t help but give out a helpless cry. You panted as you tried covering after that. Aisune was still looking into your lust covered eyes panting as well, though blushing more then yourself. Once you regained control of your body, you sighed in slight relief, you always felt better after making love. You finally released her hair then left a sloppy kiss on her lips and collapsed beside her and pulled her close.

You whispered: “Good night Aisune”

Aisune nodded: “Good night Gaara” and you both fell asleep.

26 comments:

  1. Man that was hot. your good.

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  2. WOW that was really good! I Really like this story!

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  3. loved it. it was just as great as the last one. you've got a natural talent for this kind of story. ^-^

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  4. I liked it. Especially this part:

    "Like the monster you were trying not be, you accidently grabbed Aisune’s hair and forced her further down onto you, thrusting your hips up to meet her open mouth. You were near the edge. So damn close, you could hardly control yourself."

    I think you should write a story where Gaara's alittle more, "forceful"

    Great story, regardless.

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  5. thanks alot you guys! ^-^ hmm, i never thought of it, maybe i'll do that next time! :D but i think this is the last lemon for this story...

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  6. I agree with you. I really like you're stories as they are. You are a great writer and don't let anybody tell you otherwise! Keep your creative edge and have fun when writting. BTW I always like how you present Gaara in you're stories, so don't change him from the way you want to write him.

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  7. i love your gaara story...
    and this is a good story just like the other story you make ^.^
    keep making gaara story !!!

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  8. sexy. man it makes me want gaara even more myself.

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  9. thanks for all the positive reinforcement!(really dont know how to spell that word) I really appricate it! and thanks for the tips!

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  10. i love it! maybe make one where shukaku takes "charge"

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  11. hmm... i never thought about it, but yeah! that could totally work! yes... deffinatly... hehe...

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  12. sounded sexy....and sweaty. that was hot.

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  13. yeah. i love your stories on Quizilla. i am working on reading all of them. they're great! and keep writing. you're very talened. your lemons are hot. =P

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  14. that lemon was so freaking hot! I love this story and your other ones. this lemon sounded sexy! ^.^

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  15. OMG your series is one of the best ive read!! i love your story and this one BTW, was so damn hott! thats right 2 t's you know it! i think you should be a writer you have that creative edge!

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  16. I ABOSULTLY LOVE THIS LEMON N GAARA 4 THAT MATTER, UR AN AWESOME WRITER N I ALSO HAVE A PAGE ON QUIZILLA!!1 LUV THIS LEMON IS WAS HOT>>SMOKIN WOOWHHOO

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  17. love it!! try making one where a girl says something like "I need to be punished" and Gaara does it with both entrances! Hot!

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  18. i'm a fan of all of your stories!! i've read most of em but now i'm tryin to read them all.... and i must say that they are all fantastic!!! (especially the lemon parts...)

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  19. you know i've read all of your finished stories? some more than twice! actually,i've read all of the gaara stories,even the unfinished and the one-shots,and the quizzes.i guess i'm obsessed...^,..,^ i just read the finished ones while i wait for new chapters of the others...lol,you're just too good!
    Gemini(jorgoguen on quizilla)

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  20. tht was hot. i want more

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  21. u have a way with lemons

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  22. Wow. My life is complete.

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  23. Damn,girl. Just...DAMN! Your name is Sierra right? You're that girl from Fanfiction.net arent you?! WOW! You're the one who wrote that Matsuri X Gaara story! I cant fricken remember what the name was,but it was good!

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