Tuesday, June 16, 2009

What love means deleted scene#2

Ok, here's the deleted lemon from What love means (A Gaara love story)#18 In the Rain ! Enjoy!

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Gaara's POV

Aisune: “she told me… to not get too attached to you… because she was going to kill you soon… I thought that if I left, you would no longer be in danger…”

You: “Please don’t leave me” your grip on her tightened.

Aisune looked down: “I don’t want to… But I don’t want you to get hurt Gaara…?”

You shook your head: “I don’t care if I have to spend the rest of my life fighting to live, as long as I spend it with you.” You felt your face slightly heating. You didn’t mean to say all of that. She looked up at you slightly stunned.

Aisune: “But… why would you do that for me…?” you blushed slightly more, not knowing how to answer that question…

You: “Because Aisune… You mean a lot to me… I’ve told you this before… So please don’t leave… I don’t know what I would do if you left…” she didn’t say anything, she just continued looking up at you with those beautiful light amethyst eyes. You looked down just noticing her appearance; she was dripping wet from the rain, wearing a white, thin, silk lingerie. Judging from her perked out nipples… She was probably cold… Damn… You wanted to touch them so bad… You could practically see every part of her threw her thin clothes. You could feel the excitement pulsing threw your veins. No… Not here, not now. You tried to focus on something else. Her silver white hair was drenched and some stuck to her face. Her face… Cheeks so smooth and pink… Her lips… Pink and ripe… One of the most tempting parts of her.

Aisune looked to the side: “I’ve never meant anything to anyone except my mother… How come all humans can’t be like you, my mother, and our friends?” you shrugged.

You: “Can’t answer that… Some people just aren’t as understanding and open minded” she nodded and looked back up at you. You couldn’t take it anymore. You needed her now. You plunged your lips down to hers, taking her by ultimate surprise causing her gasp to let your tongue shove into her wet cavern. Damn she tasted good. You used your muscle to search every nook and cranny of her mouth looking for anything valuable. Your first treasure; her fangs. They weren’t all that sharp, but the feel of them on your tongue was dangerously pleasurable. Your second treasure; her tongue. You didn’t know if she knew what she was doing, but you did know whatever she was doing, it was delicious. And your grand prize; the moan that made both your mouths vibrate coming from her. It pleased you so much, you moaned back into her mouth, unconsciously making the kiss more aggressive and pulled her closer. Not being able to control your urges any longer you hands slid up her sides and grabbed her chest, your thumbs instantly on her nipples. Aisune whimpered and pushed her chest slightly forward into your hands. You gnawed hungrily at her mouth while your hands fulfilled your lust with her chest. But it really wasn’t enough. You trailed your mouth away from hers as you licked, kissed, and sucked on her cheeks, chin, and neck till you got to her shoulder.

Aisune moaned: “Gaara…” she sounded slightly confused, which you could understand, you knew she’s never been in anything like this. Neither have you, but you understood it a little better then she did. You removed your right hand from her breast to grab hold of the strap on her dress and pull it downward, completely exposing her left shoulder and the top of her chest. You nipped at her flesh, trying to taste as much of it as possible, loving the feel her skin under your tongue. Aisune wrapped her arms around your neck and you sunk your face lower until you were nibbling on her upper breast. You felt Aisune’s knees go weak as she started falling.

You: “I got you” you hoisted her up as she wrapped her legs around your waist. You groaned a little as your hardened member pressed against her. You pinned her against a tree and started involuntarily grinding against her and pulled both her straps down to see all of her breast. The two round and plump mounds that heaved up and down with her breathing and shimmered in the moonlight as the raindrops continued to pour down on the two of you. You forgot it was raining. In the center of both, two hard, perked out, pink nipples that just begged you to suck on them. You did as they told, as your mouth collapsed on top of her right breast and you began taunting the nipple with your tongue. Aisune trembled a little and tangled her hands in your hair and pulled your face closer to her. When you finished, you switched to her other nipple and gave it the same treatment. Aisune moaned even louder upon feeling your manhood press against her centered heat. You went back to her mouth kissing her like crazy as your hand went down her body to her thighs were it slid up and rubbed against her panties. Also silk. She whimpered and you moved it to the side to rub a finger against her. You could tell, even with the rain, that she was wet from pleasure. You couldn’t pull back any longer. You would have her tonight. But not here… You picked her up, bridal style, and took off towards home. Once you there were there, you jumped into her room from her window, and laid her on the bed. Neither of your really cared how soaked you were.

You whispered: “Aisune… I’m going to ask you if this is alright?”

Aisune: “Is what alright?” you blushed slightly and gently grinded your clothed erection against her covered opening being too embarrassed to actually say it. “Oh…” she sat up and took hold of lower self. “So that’s why it gets so hard…” you went pinker and looked to the side. She pulled on your boxers then pulled them down, exposing your firmly standing member. She stared at it in fascination.

You turned redder: “Could you please not stare…?” she hesitated, but gently took hold of it, causing you to moan.

Aisune: “Does that… Does that feel good?” you weren’t going to lie, it felt damn good to have her small fragile hand wrap around your pulsating shaft. You nodded, closing your eyes half way. Her grip slightly tightened as she pulled you up and then pushed you back down. You let out a shaky breath beginning to thrust into her hand. Remembering that one morning, she repeated the actions and began pumping at a steady motion. You shut your eyes all the way and uncontrollably bucked into her grasp as you felt yourself getting closer. And you nearly lost it when you felt her wet tongue take a little flick across your top.

You moaned: “Aisune” the next time her tongue came in contact with it, you knew you could no longer wait. You as gently as possible in this state pushed her on her back to the bed, ripped off her panties and rolled up her dress so her dripping flower was revealed to you, the dress was already pulled down so her breast were showing so it hung loosely around her waist. Kicking off your boxers you readied yourself at her entrance. You looked down at her. So beautiful. There was no doubt in your mind. You absolutely loved this girl. And you knew she must feel something for you. You only hoped it was love as well. You pulled your hips back, shooting ‘are you sure?’ glances her way. She nodded, not really sure what was going on still. You took a shallow breath, and then buried your more then ready man hood into her awaiting womanhood. You almost lost control and went in a frenzied thrusting mode, but then you remembered, you were her first, and she needed time to adjust. You froze a little. Was Takai going to come out? You’ve seen her come out the pain… and sexual urge… Maybe this wasn’t a good idea.

Aisune whimpered: “G-Gaara!” she clung onto you from the pain. You held her closely trying to comfort her as she squirmed under you trying to get used to your size deep within her. Aisune began spreading her legs to better accommodate your aching length. Once you were sure she was ready, you began carefully, softly, and gently trusting in and out of her. Your lips found hers again, and moved slowly along her mouth, pulling her lower lip into your mouth, sliding your tongue along the skin, then pushed closer, asking for entrance. She granted it instantly, relenting her hold on that last shred of dominance she still had. She moaned softly into your mouth, willing you to move faster, and you picked up the pace, thrusting into her tight heat at a more steady rhythm. In, out. In, out. The feeling was simply mesmerizing. Desire, in its most base form.

Aisune mumbled: "Ohh..." she sighed at the same moment you let out a long, shuddering breath. You were connected together in body, in pleasure, and in soul. "More…" she whimpered, and you appeased her by increasing the force of your thrusts. Your hands wrapped around her hips, dragging her down towards your hips for every time he thrust up. Both of you moaned at the contact. Aisune began to buck beneath you again, timing her movements to rise up against yours every time you pushed down. Her legs circled you body, dragging her closer to you, burying you length deeper into her wet heat. She became louder and you knew something was about to happen. Her slick walls spasmed around you, clenching onto your length to draw your own release from your aching body. Crap. You could not cum inside her, you just thought about that now, you just couldn’t get her pregnant. You quickly, almost dying a little inside, pulled out of her, instantly regretting it but knew it was for the best. She gasped but you quickly helped her out by inserting three fingers inside her and began pumping at the speed you were trusting at. It took no time at all for her to come.

Aisune struggled to hold back a scream: “Gah…Gaara…!” once her orgasm was over, you began to taste her, got addicted, and licked her dry. She was so sweet. You almost forgot about your own need to climax, almost. But not quite. But to your surprise Aisune flipped you over and got on top of you and instantly grabbed your throbbing rod.

Aisune: “I want you… To have the same experience I did…” you smiled weakly at her, loving her even more, and she began pumping. It was only a short matter of time now. And she cut that time in half when she engulfed the head in her hot wet mouth. You moaned and bucked.

You: “Aisune…” you grabbed hold of her head, feeling her soft, long, and slightly damp hair, some trickling into your lap, amplifying your senses. Her small, sexy tongue drew circles around your tip and her head sunk lower. She fisted whatever couldn’t fit her mouth and you didn’t think you could hold out anymore.

You: “Aisune… If you keep this up I’ll…” she stopped and looked up at you and smiled.

Aisune: “It’s ok Gaara… I want to…” and then went back down. One more pump was all it took, and you filled her mouth with your seed. She gagged on it at first, not expecting that much. She swallowed it all with a smile though, even licked you clean. When she was done, she crawled up your body and fell asleep next to you. You smiled and cuddled her in your arms falling asleep soon too.


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And there you have it message me if you want the link to the whole story!

25 comments:

  1. you're the best at this btw it's yuki my account is busted on quizilla

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  2. It was good. I've read your stories on quizilla and they are great. You should keep making them 'cause you ROCK! XD

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  3. dude i luv ur storys ur an awsome writer please keep up dateing ur stories i luv 2 read them =)

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  4. e////e Nice...
    (firefox15)

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  5. awesomeness. loved it. >///<

    *sighs* and to think I was about to give up on Gaaraa -_-

    i must've been on crack or something, lol.

    ~ravennauchiha

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  6. XD thanks you guys! i appricate the compliments!

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  7. ^//////^ lolz ur stories rox!!! gaara iz my fav. in naruto <33 keep up the great work!!

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  8. hey man, now this was what I had been waiting for! I love reading your lemons. Why? Because theys sick and wrong but in a good way.
    ~BrieaLikeCookie

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  9. ur the best! I've read all your stories and their all really great, don't stop wrighting cause I can't stop reading them. XD

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  10. wow. you are really good at these. too bad quizilla wont let you post them with the story.

    all of your stories are great. dont stop writing them. their amazing. =D

    and i absolutely love gaara.

    good job! =D

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  11. really, thanks for all the support you guys!

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  12. i read a lot of books with this kind of stuff and let me tell you, this one was one of the best. you're basically a pro. keep on with the stories. can't wait to see more. ^^

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  13. 8D you really think im a pro?! Thanks much! That means so much! ^-^

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  14. Your stories are amazing :D I love them all. ^_^

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  15. I just love your stories!!
    it's so hard to find any good ones T ^ T

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  16. I love it! Dont stop posting cuz ur really good at writing!

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  17. OMG girl u got alot of talent i read ur stories on quizilla ur awsome im proud to b a loyal fan dont stop we love u ^w^

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  18. man,once again you have proved why you are my favorite quizilla writer.you are the best at these,i find myself looking forward to them.*BLUSH* its so sick and twisted,but in a good way,you know? besides my own gaara story,you are the only thing that keeps me comeingg back to that site.btw,when and if i get to it,could you write one of these for my story?
    ~Gemini(jorgoguen on quizilla)

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  19. GREAT JOB ON IT!!! IT WAS SO GOOD! I MADE ONE BUT IM STILL NOT DONE. ITS HAS SOME STUFF LIKE THAT BUT I STILL NEED HELP. ANYHOW I LIKE HOW YOU USE THE WORDS. PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!!

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  20. This... is...AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!When I read this,and don't think I'm a prevert or anything and B.T.W[by the way],I'm the same girl who posted another comment somewhere on one of your lemons,but I could actually feel like I was being pulled into the scene.On a scale of 1-10,I give you a 50,it's that well detailed.By the way,My name's Olivia Sherman.

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  21. this was aawsome!
    but... i cant seem to find chapter 18.5 on quizilla

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  22. Naruangirl.......WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO ALL OF YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????
    I went to read one like I always do,but it was gone!Why?Are you earsing them?If not,do you know what's going on?Please I love your stories so don't earse them!This is the same girl who posted on April 22,2011.Please respone soon!

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  23. Naruangirl, I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but Quizilla apparently decided to shut down and now yours, mine everyone who posted anything on there, the work is gone! Please read this soon! You would know me as either PrettyWitchRinChanChi15, HybridVampireMarina18 or my new screen name CeriseAppleWolf10.

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